Stan K-B [to RSGwynn): As you point
out, all enjambs are not born equal…Dipping at random, I find an (aab)
unit followed by an end-stopped (b):
We heard cremationists guffaw and snort
At Grabermann’s denouncing the Retort
As detrimental to the birth of wraiths.
We all avoided criticizing faiths. [623]
Then comes a (ccdde) enjambed-unit burst = role/soul/Chinese/teas/go, followed
by (eff) = Poe/strange/range.
RSGwynn: … the Botkin
hospital link a little far-fetched, but in Texas, if we say, "He's at
Rusk," we mean he's loony.
JM: To grab the opportunity presented
by Stan’s quotes* and Gwynn’s last comment related to “loonies,”
I’d like to return to Shade’s verses (623/629) in connection to
which Kinbote notes that above “the fate of beasts”
Shade had initially written, and then struck out: “The
madman’s fate.” He was now able to introduce
his conjectures about “the ultimate destiny of madmen’s
souls,” when he asserts that “personally” he has not “known
any lunatics; but …heard of several amusing cases in New Wye (“Even
in Arcady am I,” says Dementia, chained to her gray column).”
His favorite case may hide an authorial clue and criticism: “ …the
old man…at the Exton railway station, who thought he was God and began
redirecting the trains, was technically a loony, but John calls him a fellow
poet.” ** (Kinbote/Nabokov, as suggested earlier)
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*Is the name Grabermann related, from the German, to “graves
and tombs” and to cremationism? Tombs will gain importance with the
reference, on CK’s notes to line 629, to the painting by Poussin, indicating
death in Arcady, and madness (the inscription read by the shepherds is carved
on a tomb).
** CK notes for the lines SKB selected on “enjambs”,
that he’s mentioned “a trivial variant” and adds: “the
whole passage…would be quite Hudibrastic had its pedestrian verse been
one foot shorter” (jambs, feet, pedestrian verses…!)